
Occasionally neighbors are sometimes hard to get along with. Yet if you set aside your differences some of your neighbors are very nice people if you take the time to get to know them. The short story "The Clearing is a perfect example of getting to know your neighbors and getting to know people.
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ReplyDeleteYour message is clear, please check you last sentence to make your thesis even stronger.
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ReplyDeleteIf this is your introduction this is really good. I like it but maybe you could paint a picture but other wise your thesis is great and the whole point is amazing.
ReplyDeleteThanks I will try to paint a better picture in poeples minds
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