Saturday, December 18, 2010

Imagine

Imagine...............

not having anyone there for you

not knowing were you are going to sleep tonight

only having the cloths on your back to live

not knowing what food or even if you are going to eat today

not even knowing were your brothers and sisters are or if they are even still alive

having a mother that does not even remember you

being the only black boy in a all white school

having some teachers that have no belief in you and only think you are going to fail

sitting in class and having no idea what your teacher are talking about

kids looking at you and giving you looks and thinking who is that big black guy

This are all the things that Michel Oher in the movie the "The Blind Side" had to go through and think about almost every day.

3 comments:

  1. This is a very sad piece, but you can tell the time and effort you put into the piece. Good job!

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  2. I like this piece a lot. I have never read the book but I can tell it is very sad. Overall, I though your word choice and sentence fluency were good. Great job overall!!!! -- Paityn

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  3. I really liked the repetition and all the feeling.

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